xplicitlyricist's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[K-Dm - Breaking Point]

Hey

Found ya thru zajed.
He's right!
You deserve way more attention on here.
You got some sick beats man.
Keep it yp.
10/10 5/5

Xplicit.
Down N Dirty ent.

If you ever want me on a track, let me know. Check my stuff.

K-Dm responds:

tru

thx alot

ill check u out

K-Dm

[Xplicit - Hate on us Ft.Lej&P)]

Fair enough

We all had some good things to say about the hating Lej.
Appreciate that.
But to be honest, it seems you are the one doing the hating!
And by the way, the reason the song was taken down was because your voice was WAY to loud and over powering compared to the song.
XT

Lejin responds:

Go suck a bick dick faggit. Someone showed me where you recently bin trying to talk shit about the BRONX. You a pussy you SOFT so shut you fucking jumping kangaroo cock suckin ass up. You fucked up real good pussy boy HIP HOP WAS INVENTED IN THE BRONX ASK ANYBODY YOU STUPID FUCKING OUTCAST!

Im all over the fucking world i got girlfriend round yourway in sydney too. Call me a racist because race dont mean shit to me you piece of shit ask anyboody where Hip Hop was invented you stupid shit. ANYBODY even fucking racoon has fucking enough knowledge to know THE BX INVENTED HIP HOP MUTHER FUCKING IDIOT! RESPECT WHERE IT CAME FROM you stupid shit.

Fuck you Fagot keep talking behind n***as backs on other n***as pages. Pussy

[Lejin - Everywhere I Go]

HES BACK

Thought you were missing.
Heres a 10 you need it.
I aint tryna takeyour life away. But i'll tell ya what. You get my crew involved and I'm the one to step up.
Speak soon.
Keep an eye for the diss i'm dropppin on ya.

Xplicit.
Down N Dirty ent.

ps. to be honest, this track was actually not bad.

Lejin responds:

You couldnt take a insect's life away you measly jumping Kangaroo cock sucking FAGit lmfao. you aint shit bitch your nobody THE BRONX INVENTED HIP HOP you stupid clueless idiot. Your nobody and I will NEVER HELP you get noticed you aint SHIT and you NEVER WILL BE you fucking NO BUDGET BUM ASS DICK RIDING BITCH! your a fucking joke rofl!

lmfao you cant even rap better than ses.

thats pathethic you wack bitch. you suck faggit go zero bomb me cause neithr butcher orJ-Kellz aint signing to you. and Kellz aint sign either then you faggits blame me but guess what.

your mad,
your hating,

But i love it.
<<BANG>>KO!
The truth hurts!

you aint shit.

[.:Z:.Breath]

My opinion

I think its perfect, you just need to lengthen it, make 16 bar verses and a few choruses (the corus im guessing as the big strings part).
So just lengthen it man. Maybe add a little violin in the background that goes with the melody (piano) but nothing that would drown out the soft feel, or interfere with the strings on chorus.
Good luck.
XT (Down N DIrty)

Zajed responds:

nah right now the song has kinda a random structure or something, im gonna add more to the backround, and make it more powerful, du push the emotion of the soung a bit more

thanks for the review i appreciate it

[no love for mainstream]

well done

Like it.
Very nice flow.
No lower than 10/10 5/5 for you Merc.
How's our collab btw man? Deadline is kinda gone and i need it pretty bad.
Xplicit.
Down N Dirty ent.

mseemercury responds:

i like the beat and your verse but i cant stand the hool pls redo the hook and ill finish it asap

[Lejin - Your Not Black]

Hey Lej.

How do we know if you are black, when no one has ever seen a pic of you?
For all we know you could be white too, most others on here are.
I'm white, home grown Aussie, P-B is white, Merc is Puerto Rican, WyteNoiz is, you guessed it white, Naysly, black (ok one so far), J-Kellz, White, Lejin (NOONE KNOWS)

Thats all I'm sayin man.
Keep it real tho.

Lejin responds:

Hes not black XD

Thats all I'm sayin man.
Keep it real tho.

[aspects freesytles]

nice free man

Did well.
Enjoyed it, heaps of energy and xpression.
Look forward to hearing more merc, you got that voice yo. That individual style shit ya know.
XT.

mseemercury responds:

thx my nig

[Cloud9ine Rider]

k...

You need to turn your drums beats up if your using synths, and they hold ok melody, but seriously, they get really annoying. I don't know why you don't like P-Balla's music but i'll tell ya this, him=10, you=6(maybe). Now as far as i'm concerned i'm being nice about this, i dnt care about you and P, i just wanna know...why diss Australia man? That's my country and you aint just dissin that your dissin all of it's music, which means MY music, which means i'm going to have to ask you take it back before i do something we will both regret. Just say sorry to Australia. All i ask and you will never hear from me again.
XT

Cloud9ine responds:

MAn shut the fuck up. You aint gonna do nothing. Quit being so sensitive and taking shit personal.

[next thing poppin feat p balla]

Really good for a gangster song

A good song for that 'i don't give a fuck' mood we all end up in sometimes. Love the hook and it was a slow but hot verse from P. Neto your flow is getting loads better. Enjoyed this all round. Good job.
Coulda been a little better quality but i guess we aint riding in studios yet. lol.
Keep it real guys.
XT

passionboom responds:

good looks..yea p did his thing...i try u kno...

[LateNight NG Volume 2]

Eye man

I agree, me and P-Balla interview. That shit would up your ratings, lols.
Hit me back, or P, and let us know. Iv'e still heard nothin from Lil Dope's interview, so throw me on this one.
Keep it real man. Oh and maybe keep the show to the point, some of it drags out a lil, but i'd like to see it keep goin. And i thought you and Lil Dope had beef? Anyways hit me back man.
XT

Lejin responds:

i doubt it man P-balla is kind'of a nobody on ng. His front page is like a christmas wishlist....lmfao?