I enjoyed it
Only one thing i can say... I was waiting on drums from start, haha. But all in all it really doesn't need a major percussion. However one thing I didn't like was i felt the high pitched keys should have continued when the violin came in.
Otherwise i quite enjoyed it. Seems very sad.
Different
I like it. The beat had to grow on me but when it did its great. Very different, and i don't mean for you, i mean in general for a genre this is a change. It's a very good thing to see people who aren't well famous yet can redefine the genre of rap and rnb.
haha. Nice man.
Too lazy. Classic.
Nice flow. Best line is "Stick my dick in ya ear just to fuck ya logic".
Well done man. Keep it up.
Talk in a sec, haha.
XT
It's starting!!
Nice man.
Good flow, Good lines, Good everything.
I heard A few others are whipping up something soon so can't wait.
The competition is heating up.
Good luck Kellz.
I like.
XT
Killed it
NOt much else to say.
If this track is still alive, it's pleading for mercy from the lyrics you 3 pounded it to death with.
Good job.
NEW TALENT!
Personally i think you aint bad at all. Not overly great either, but i see some mad potential. You gotta keep droppin stuff regularly and check out what newgrounds is like. there are the real peeps who keep rap and music true and be themselves. And then there's some you will find out arn't true at all, infact more like fake fucks who diss everyone for no reason. But check out the hiphop portal and keep this shit up. Sounds like you will fit in here.
XT
Down N Dirty ent.
YBS~
NIICCEE!! =D
Nice one man, posting this submission on my page right now.
Love some of those lines man. Good flow, good sound.
Can't wait to see what ya up against!
Good luck.
I'll keep ya posted!
XT
Just in case you didn't notice, I took the liberty of remastering your vocals to match mine since my quality is different.
3.79 + 0.24 = (3.89)
Well done man.
10 / 5 etc.
Ummm... no real criticism, good as always. I love the beat, the ryhmes are sweet, i agree with P about start of verse 2, i think its good and suits but coulda been done a lil better. Otherwise perfect man.
Good message. And good job.
Wanna collab soon? I gotta competition comin up, you should enter, for the collab.
Laters Kellz.
XT
Down N Dirty ent.
YBS
YBS killin it
Love the r'n'b feel to it.
Nice flows too.
Steppin it up every time man.
Hit me up for that collab, or ill organize somethin wit a verse for ya.
Xt
Down N Dirty ent.
YBS ent.
I like it
Keep it up man.
Both did well.
Love this beat to, simple but effective.
XT
Down N Dirty ent.
YBS~
Life is temporary. Music's forever.
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Australia
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