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Let me on it

Ill jump on verse two you do 1.
Let me know if taht's aight man.
Keep shit comin to this is hot.
Xplicit.
Down N Dirty ent.

PM me homie.

Never a dissapointment!

Keep doin ya thing man!
XT

Good shit

Chorus kinda got over done at teh start. But love the ambience of it.
Heaps good verses from both of you.
Keep up the good shit Merc and Sly.
Xplicit.
Down N Dirty ent.

Nice shit man

Gettin better everytime i hear you free man.
I know ur takin time with the collabo, just lettin ya know three weeks maybe four would be good before then. My record release is delayed so it's cool.
Cheers man.
Excellent song too. Even if it's freestyle, it sounds pro.
Keep up Merc.
Xplicit.
Down N Dirty ent.

My opinion

I think its perfect, you just need to lengthen it, make 16 bar verses and a few choruses (the corus im guessing as the big strings part).
So just lengthen it man. Maybe add a little violin in the background that goes with the melody (piano) but nothing that would drown out the soft feel, or interfere with the strings on chorus.
Good luck.
XT (Down N DIrty)

Zajed responds:

nah right now the song has kinda a random structure or something, im gonna add more to the backround, and make it more powerful, du push the emotion of the soung a bit more

thanks for the review i appreciate it

well done

Like it.
Very nice flow.
No lower than 10/10 5/5 for you Merc.
How's our collab btw man? Deadline is kinda gone and i need it pretty bad.
Xplicit.
Down N Dirty ent.

mseemercury responds:

i like the beat and your verse but i cant stand the hool pls redo the hook and ill finish it asap

hmmmm...

Love it,
Is sooo ghetto style.
The rapper sounds like 2pac, definatley fame material, but way to close with 2pac's voice, need originality.
Other than that 10/10 5/5.
Xplicit.
Down N Dirty ent.

I love it

My girlfriend of 2 1/2 years and I just broke up.
And now I have some serious emotional shit to get off of my chest, I am going to spit to this beat, it couldn't be any better, i see rushed, but it puts emotion into the track man.
Keep the hits comin Zajed.
Xplicit.
Down N Dirty ent.

Pretty good guys

Like the feel, nice flows, pretty versatile.
Not really into this whole (ng rap) like everyone is focused on newgrounds, P-Balla and I only want to rap and produce in general, and you guys are dissin everyone on here, but if the songs take off, noone will know who you're talkin about. But anyway good job, SES your ra was actually good on this one, usually i'm not into it, this one was good flow.
And once again, keep me and PopRock away from teh shit aight.
We'll listen, but we won't take sides.
Down N Dirty comes first.
Xplicit. DDE.

Diggin it

Ya gonna bring some sick ryhmes to DDE man.
How far off is our collab btw? Hit me up in a PM.
Xplicit.
Down N Dirty ent

Life is temporary. Music's forever.

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